Mal Goes to War by Edward Ashton offers a few redeeming qualities but ultimately falls short of its potential. Certain characters are crafted with depth and nuance, yet most remain flat and one-dimensional, lacking complexity. The magic system has intriguing elements but is largely inconsistent, poorly developed, and strains credulity, undermining the story's immersion. While the plot and dialogue occasionally deliver clever, humorous twists, these moments are overshadowed by numerous flaws. Unmotivated character actions, glaring oversights, plot holes, and narrative missteps abound, leaving the story feeling disjointed. It's evident that the book was rushed to publication, needing significant additional revisions. A disappointing read, Mal Goes to War earns 2/5 stars and is not recommended.
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